Rejected: Hobgoblin by John Coyne
Mar. 29th, 2010 11:26 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
kilroyRationale: This plot is one that makes me want to throw things at walls: kid delves into madness, thinks fantasy games are real, finds out they are real, saves the day, gets over fantasy. Characterization appears to be cardboard, and I already hate the lead.
Page count: 27 (3225 total)
Verdict: Toss. (4/10 keepers)
Page count: 27 (3225 total)
Verdict: Toss. (4/10 keepers)