Yuletide tracker 2

[kilroy]

I'd forgotten, sadly, that while writing is something I can sit down and do in chunks, editing is something that I sit down and it sucks me in for indeterminate time periods. I think I still have enough time, but the schedule today's going to have to be a wee bit different than yesterday.

Editing status
Scene 1: First pass complete, moderate revisions. Close to right.
Scene 2: First pass complete, heavy revision done. Close to right.
Scene 3: Needs a pass. Tone's wrong, although some of the dialogue can stay.
Scene 4: Basically fine.
Scene 5: First pass complete, moderate revisions. Could be longer, but the heart is there.
Scene 6: Basically fine.
Scene 7: First pass complete, really heavy revision done. May be right, need to check later.
Scene 8: First pass complete, added a bit to the end. Beginning and ending are aggravatingly close to being tuned properly.
Scene 9: First pass complete, heavy revision done. Very close to right, except possibly the last line.

The lesser of the two emotional dialogue scenes to fix and expand, then the first real whole-story go-over.

As yesterday, this post updated as progress occurs.